Incertitude (1/?) [Ookiku Furikabutte | NC-17 | Abe/Mihashi, Hanai/Tajima]

[worblehat]

Title: Incertitude
By: worblehat
Fandom: Ookiku Furikabutte
Pairing: Abe/Mihashi, Hanai/Tajima
Rating: NC-17
This Chapter: G, Abe/Mihashi hints
Summary: It's hard, sometimes, to go for what you want - especially when you don't understand it. But even once you do... how can you tell if it's right?
Notes: This is the first/introductory chapter to a long fic

Comments

[ravenpirate]

Even though I know nothing about the fandom, this was super cute. The opening bits made me laugh because it reminded me of school. I never did any of that stuff in high school, but in elementary, HELL YES. It makes me think of those "Do you like me? Circle one: Yes or No" notes that you'd find in your desk. ndkjsankdnksa

-He was still in thought about Mihash when a giggle

I think the i in his name ran away. WHERE DID IT GO BRI.

-Abe didn't bother turning around to see who'd said it it as he picked up his bag and headed outI SEE DEJA VU

[worblehat]

Hahahha, that was the exact feeling I was going for, pretty much. The awkward, stupid things kids do to get together. School is fun to write in general, since I'm no longer in it

[ravenpirate]

Because it makes your writing more you. dnksja LMFAO. QUIT BEING LAZY YOU BASTARD.

Why do you use OpenOffice? You should use Word. CONVERT, BRI. CONVERT.

Psh no worries. I know that for some people, fanfic is easier/more fun to write than original fic. And since I don't know the fandom at all, it was pretty much like reading original fic for me anyway.

[worblehat]

IT DOES. >\\ Whatever, I was only lazy about the dashes! The rest was intentional. DO YOU HEAR, I AM BEING INTENTIONALLY ILLITERATE!!!

Because Word costs money to put on this computer. And I'd rather use what's free.

It really is, is the thing. I get more ideas that seem just... more fun to finish. Ehhhh. But yay! At least it has an upside.

[jillybean_6939]

Oh Abe! You are so clueless!

I can't wait till there's more!

[worblehat]

I like him being clueless, ahaha.

Thanks, man! I'm working on the second part but also trying to finish the episodes so that I don't write something totally contradictory. :) Anyway, I appreciate the [perhaps inadvertent] encouragement!

[ruinedempires]

absolutely loved this! abe's thoughts were great and it's fun to see how someone so observant totally missing something right in front of him.

[worblehat]

Hahah, yeah - I do tend to like that in anime (the missing obvious things part). Thanks for reading this! :)