Shears: Chapter 3/? [NC-17; Logan/Scott]

[worblehat]

Title: Shears
Author: worblehat
Genre: X-Men
Pairing: Logan/Scott
Rating: NC-17 overall
Disclaimer: These characters probably belong to Marvel. Not me.
Notes: Work-In-Progress!
Summary: A reluctant story of a man with heightened senses, who is saved most unwillingly (if he'd been awake at the time). Logan/Scott, adult-rated overall. Angst-filled, for

Comments

[inathunderstorm]

Oh, yay for kissing!! *is pleased*

This was great--I especially liked Logan's thoughts during the scene with Rogue. Nicely done!

One thing:
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You have a weird > at the end of that where I think you wanted a different punctuation thingee. I'm so helpful.

I really like the way you write, btw. I've noticed this before--you have a distinctive style and it really pulls at me. Enjoying this lots, babe!!!

[worblehat]

Yep, they finally got somewhere. Excitement! :D

Mmm, well I'll admit: it was nice to keep rewinding that scene and trying to put something that would make sense with his facial expressions. I've had to pay a lot of attention to shit going on in the background though, which is actually rather helpful. Scott's in more frames than I realised!

Yeahhhh. I'm always too quick to post, it seems. I'll fix that at lunch, as well as a typo I noticed while skimming to get to your reply. Damnation. I'd use betas if I weren't so impatient. Alas. So thank you for pointing that out! My laziness factor thanks you especially. ♥

Hah! Really? I know there's still a lot of improvement to be had, but I mean. Still, wow. I am pleasantly flabbergasted to hear you say that.

If you don't mind, I'm gonna go feel cool now. *|o|*

[ladytygereyez]

This was so good. And you did great on writing from Scott's POV. The kiss was fantabulous and I can't wait for more.

[worblehat]

Was it? Yay then. :)

I'm still a bit inexperienced at Scott's POV but I'm happy to hear it worked okay. And yay for kissing, mos definitely! Thanks for reading along!

[novalinx]

*squeee*!

oh the kiss!

loverly :D

and I noticed another typo when I did a quick scan to see what I wanna applaud you about. Here: he can't help the bugle in his trousers in the bit when they first start chatting in the garage (or what I assume is the garage) anyway, I think you mean bulge not bugle.. although a bugle certainly puts a different spin on things..

anyway, it's all good, can't wait for more!

Tabee :)

[worblehat]

Kisses are fun times, to be sure. And thanks for pointing out the typo! I may be kinky, but bugles are pushing it, hah! I've changed it now so hopefully that's the last of 'em (typos, I mean). I'm glad you've given it a read and I hope the rest doesn't disappoint, if you choose to keep reading.

Thanks again! :)

[theghettocyborg]

That was hot hotness... I'm too tired to give coherent feedback, but I very much liked it.

[worblehat]

No worries - any kind of feedback is appreciated on my end. Just knowing people are reading is damned encouraging.

That said, I'm glad you seem to like it! Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. :)