a rush of heat and light

Oct 27, 2005 15:27

Lost in a rush of heat and light ( Read more... )

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yume_kokoro October 28 2005, 02:34:17 UTC
beautiful - I love the way the tone of this poem shifts from intense to haunting.

(btw - might I suggest changing "Will Never" to simply "Ever" ? - 2nd to last line)

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word_lover October 28 2005, 03:23:36 UTC
thank you dear =)

perhaps if i had said (will never) -- in the parentheses -- it would have reflected better how i meant that line. but now that i think over your phrasing here, i think yours is still better... thanks for the suggestion.

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Very random question... megan1717 October 29 2005, 11:10:42 UTC
I randomly found your journal and I love how you made it say "my past" instead of "calendar". Do you be any chance have the over-rides so that I could make me journal say that too? Pretty please? ;-)

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Re: Very random question... word_lover October 29 2005, 15:23:44 UTC
you can change all of that stuff by creating a style. i didn't know what i was doing, i just sort of played around with everything and changed a lot of things until it looked how i wanted it. go under manage and then styles and you can do it there.

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