Fingerprints

Nov 05, 2005 19:49

I wrote this poem in response to the challenge going on over at the onelinecreative community. They post a quote or word and you come up with a poem or other form of writing for what is given. The given quote is bolded ( Read more... )

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yume_kokoro November 6 2005, 13:27:59 UTC
I really like this poem.
"We try to hold the things
That slip
Easily between hesitant fingers;
Tracing fears
And insecurities
Into every brush of the whorls,
Against anything solid,
Or not."

That's my favorite part. Heavy.

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word_lover November 6 2005, 17:16:11 UTC
thank you, tonya. i'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

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