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word_lover

Nov 16, 2005 14:15

From a double challenge at onelinecreative, using both "an unhinged fortune" and "layers upon my breath" in one piece ( Read more... )

Comments 4

yume_kokoro November 17 2005, 01:00:34 UTC

raw and sharp - u know I love it! nice work.

word_lover November 17 2005, 01:45:54 UTC

thanks darlin! tried to express a different kind of tone than my usual work this time. glad you liked it. =)

bjorkfan22 November 17 2005, 02:04:37 UTC

Oh, I love the last half, where you start using the parallel thoughts in parens. Awesome!

word_lover November 17 2005, 02:07:06 UTC

thank you muchly new friend =)

glad you enjoyed it!