another poem

Nov 22, 2005 11:56

Again, from the onelinecreative community challenge... this is two challenges in one - use the word "repulsive" and use both the phrases "the feeding frenzy" and "my bones ache"

Your insecurity seethes
Searches
With keen eyes
And I am caught in the froth
Only a passing object to you
Something to be picked up
Handled
Tossed aside
Spit out like a repulsiveInsect ( Read more... )

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word_lover November 22 2005, 19:39:39 UTC
thank you =)

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marinz November 23 2005, 01:23:05 UTC
hey you ;)
Sry I haven't been around much lately...

Loved the poem :)
"The ride seduced me
But I was jostled too hard
Thrown into the backseat" ****amazing.

So the job thing is final hunh?...good luck with that :)
but I'm sure you'll find a good job and you'll be able to handle the newbie thing ;)
*hugs*

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word_lover November 23 2005, 01:35:17 UTC
hey, it's cool i know you're super busy with school. that post wasn't directed at you either if you saw it before i hid it.

thanks for the compliments on the poem, i'm glad you liked it =)

yeah the job thing is final. i'll have to find another job within the next month or so. stress! i'm sure it will work out okay but for now it's just got me all stressed out. ugh..

thanks hon. *hugs*

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marinz November 23 2005, 03:25:25 UTC
nope I didn't catch that post...
and thanks for understanding :)

stress hurts...but it keeps you alive.

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