poem

Dec 03, 2005 22:02

Response to challenges for "promise" and "stone weighted down in" at onelinecreative...

You threw your
Promises
At me, each one
Like a stone weighted down inside
Deep pockets
As you watched me walk
Into the sun
Spreading
Across the waves
Away from you
Suffocate in your arms
Or in the depths
Of the sea
I chose to drown
Alone

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yume_kokoro December 4 2005, 04:08:38 UTC
the last two lines are especially haunting

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word_lover December 4 2005, 04:10:01 UTC
this is for my last relationship

heh

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