Every time it rains

[word_lover]

Your eyes paint my prison
Appropriate hemming
it is mine, just for me
Oppression so sweet
Golden bars to a black hole
Seductive chains
resist the rising
The mantra you gave

My eyes hide the years
Buried there
locked away
Stitched into an inside pocket
Icy metal on prickled skin
Purpose is clear
beloved belonging
Every time it rainsMy definition

Comments

[yume_kokoro]

beautiful ^___^ - like tearful anger.

[word_lover]

interesting... it was coming from a perspective without anger, but i guess it could be read in many ways

thank you. =)

[princedanterose]

Freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose....

I like this, it feels good.
Dante

[word_lover]

this is true. (your quote). i like that.

thank you. =)

[plaidred]

I love it, I can relate except for my eyes do not hide my years and certainly not my pain. :S

[word_lover]

thank you for commenting, i'm glad you liked it.

it's always nice to know when others can relate to your thoughts/feelings.