poems

[word_lover]

Another handful of poems... the challenge sections are bolded.

*****

Spill your poison
Seductive and sweet
(I am not so easily fooled)
You want me
Alone, shattered
In your hateful mind

I am untouched (not oblivious)
The earth runs
Deep along my fingertipsI am grounded, though

Comments

[marinz]

*applauds*
those were brilliant! Brilliant!
Well done mah friend.
No but seriously, yeah.

And the second one is my favourite. I just wanna read it over and over again...

[word_lover]

thank you darlin =D

i'm glad you shared which one you like best. i always like to know what appeals most to people whether it is one poem out of a group or one line or section of a particular one.

[imperfectively]

in that case, i like the 3rd one.

[word_lover]

=) thanks for letting me know

glad you liked it