hunted

[word_lover]

My heart clutches
When I hear your steps
Closing in closer
Shivers, both delightful
And cruel, stinging my skin
As I perch silently
Behind the closet door
The game goes on
You know all my places
But still you take your time
Torturous pleasure
Is your favorite offense
And I love waiting
Recalling the past times
Retracing memories

Comments

[marinz]

I think this one's my fav out of the ones you posted today.
It makes me think of animals and the forest and the sun...and I see trees and leaves and blue skies....
And I can hear the heartbeat of a frightened, but excited, person.
I dunno if that made sense lol and I dunno how you had intended this one to be, but that's what I get from it...

[word_lover]

the heartbeat of a frightened, but excited, person.

that part's right for sure. ;) more about people hunting than animals though..

but i'm glad you liked it =)

[marinz]

haha yeah i know it's not about hunting animals lol
I just meant that like you know how animals are scared when they hear gunshots or ppl chasing them...and those big, soft, watery eyes and stuff...
k nvm lol :P

[word_lover]

yeah i know what you mean lol

[imperfectively]

i liked this one.

[word_lover]

thank you =)

[grey_blue_eyes]

I like it very much :) Very sensual ;)

[word_lover]

thanks jolene =) i'm glad you liked it