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Mar 01, 2006 20:47

The words you wove around me ( Read more... )

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grey_blue_eyes March 2 2006, 03:08:08 UTC
Lovely Lori. I really enjoy this one.

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word_lover March 2 2006, 03:10:18 UTC
thank you =) it was my response to one of the challenges at onelinecreative

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marinz March 2 2006, 03:38:44 UTC
this one made me feel all warm inside.
I wish I was a kid again. *sighs*

"Someday I’ll grow out of this
This silly yearning
This simple belief in anything
That sounds
Pretty"
Loved those lines.

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word_lover March 2 2006, 04:17:50 UTC
thanks hon =) glad you liked it ♥

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kalaryn March 2 2006, 18:49:56 UTC
From my own experience it is better to believe in the pretty lies then to shut down and not hear them ever because it's so easy to shut that door but to open that door is the most difficult process and I still haven't fully opened it. Any more, at my age, I just want to believe again whether they are lies or not.

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word_lover March 2 2006, 18:54:31 UTC
eh.. i agree with that to a point, too... and i don't think i could ever stop believing... i don't always write the truth (either reality or the truth about my real feelings) when i write. just bits from feelings i've felt before, a bunch of things spliced together, or something taken to the extreme, etc. wherever the words pull me when i start, basically...

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kalaryn March 2 2006, 19:19:08 UTC
I do know what you mean, I used to write a lot myself, even had a specific journal for it but I haven't in ages and for a better sound things have to be elaborated on or stretched a bit. :)

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blondieof3 March 3 2006, 07:42:03 UTC
You are amazing. I added you to my friends list...if that is not ok please let me know. I found you via Kaitesquill and Deadguttergirl.

I really love this writing.
B~

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word_lover March 3 2006, 12:44:21 UTC
thank you so much =)

new friends are always nice, i don't mind at all. i'll add you back.

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blondieof3 March 3 2006, 14:34:00 UTC
Gr8! Thanks so much!
B~

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