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word_lover

writing

Mar 12, 2006 19:45

If I could push all the stars out of line ( Read more... )

Comments 4

kaitesquill March 13 2006, 02:30:35 UTC

You have eyes like smoke
That throw out arrows
And burn my fingertips
As I’m just walking by... love this

and I really adore the first one.
I love it when you write poetry. *smile*

word_lover March 13 2006, 02:34:13 UTC

=D
thanks darlin
i wish i could be as consistently productive as you!

marinz March 18 2006, 04:27:35 UTC

Ok I know I'm way late with this comment since this entry was posted like 5 days ago...but still, I have to say lol and I think you have comments sent to your e-mail so you'll prolly get them?!

I loved the first one. And these 2 lines especially stood out:
"If you could hear what lies at the bottom of my words
If I could reach the bottom of your stomach"

The 4th one from the bottom...I don't know how to describe, but it touched my heart in a weird way. It was...innocent? soft? bittersweet? I dunno the word...but u get the picture?

and the 3rd one from the bottom has got to be my favourite. I read it over a few times. The poem in whole made my herat tremble, if that makes any sense. It was absolutely beautiful. I think the 2nd stanza is my favourite, but I totally love every bit of it.

♥

word_lover March 18 2006, 04:32:53 UTC

thanks so much for the comments darlin *hugs*

i do get my comments emailed (unless lj is being annoying lol) so no worries =)

i'm really glad you liked them. i do know what you mean about the feelings you got, because i have felt those things from others' words at times too. it means a lot that my writing could inspire it. ♥