Comments | word_lover: more writing

word_lover

more writing

Mar 22, 2006 21:21

Studious glances cause no stir ( Read more... )

Comments 17

imperfectively March 23 2006, 04:59:54 UTC

i liked the one about "small girls". very touching. reminds me of something i wrote on blurty.

have you ever written about someone on LJ, or rather been "inspired" by their circumstances to mold into some lines of poetry?

word_lover March 23 2006, 05:03:19 UTC

thank you. =)

i get bits and pieces from different things. nothing has ever been strictly about or for any certain person, but others have inspired thoughts that turn into other things. if that makes sense.

imperfectively March 23 2006, 05:09:50 UTC

i really want you to read it too (mine) but i can't access my memories over there right now. i'll find it. (i know you're hanging on the edge of your seat. *wink*

word_lover March 23 2006, 05:10:41 UTC

sure... i'd love to. =) link me when you find it and i'll check it out.

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blondieof3 March 23 2006, 05:46:01 UTC

TOTAL WOW ness ! Whew...you've been busy! These are all so lovely, beautifully written!

B~

word_lover March 23 2006, 13:35:38 UTC

thank you!

yeah i set all these monthly goals for the new year, and the one this month was to write something every day, even if it turned out short and not so great. so i've been trying to do that.

i'm glad you liked them. =)

blondieof3 March 23 2006, 16:00:44 UTC

what a gr8 idea...goals monthly! WOW..you must be very organized. I wish I were. I am trying...more like struggling but I'll get there. When I worked in the corporate world I was very organized - totally different at home!

Oh, they're all so good!

Take care!
B~

word_lover March 23 2006, 17:07:49 UTC

lol... you will learn as you read more of my entries that i'm a little obsessive compulsive about organization and stuff... a lot of my friends here already poke fun at me for it. sometimes i am too organized for my own good... i wish i were more laid back at times.

i'm so glad you liked the writing. i always love getting everyone's feedback. =)

yume_kokoro March 23 2006, 12:00:10 UTC

This is overwhelmingly beautiful - are these one poem? The y read like one peom - one really great poem.

word_lover March 23 2006, 13:33:09 UTC

no they were all separate... that's interesting. i'll have to read them all as one and see what affect that has. hadn't thought about it... and thank you so much =)

bjorkfan22 March 23 2006, 16:36:54 UTC

I totally read them as one; a series. Lovely.

word_lover March 23 2006, 17:06:09 UTC

Thank you. =) I guess since I wrote them all close together, my mind was on the same wavelength the whole time even though they were written as separate pieces. I'm glad you liked them.

marinz March 25 2006, 16:39:47 UTC

My fav is the 2nd from the bottom.
Like wow.
I could read it over and over again.

Especially the first few lines:
"My heart is very old
Inside small walls
You read histories to me
In a small chair and I reach out
For parts of the past
That you hold in your hands"

they made my heart beat faster.

word_lover March 26 2006, 22:03:17 UTC

thank you =) that's such a great compliment