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Under A Kobol Moon

Apr 26, 2011 14:12

Author: word_vomity
Title: Under A Kobol Moon
Characters: Kara/Lee with slight Helo/Sharon
Rating: PG 13
Total Word Count: 1,984
Spoilers: Season 2 Through Home 2
Summary: Kara gives Lee a hard time about his welcome home kiss in Home. Lee is not amused.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Total own-age for Ron & Crew.

“Gives me the creeps.” Lee watches Helo ( Read more... )

fanfic, kara, lee, author: word_vomity, fanfiction, bsg

Comments 8

damao2010 April 26 2011, 20:39:04 UTC

Gosh, I really liked this. If felt very believable, you know. If only they had had this talk back then instead of in UB, so much pain could have been avoided. *sighs*

word_vomity April 26 2011, 20:56:08 UTC

thanks! so many 'if onlys'. *sigh*

justascrewup2 April 27 2011, 01:37:27 UTC

Wow. This was short, but powerful, believeable and oh so good :)

word_vomity July 26 2011, 17:07:32 UTC

Yay! Thank you!!!!!

rdave1 April 27 2011, 12:35:32 UTC

Nicely done! If only this had taken place things may have turned out differently.

word_vomity July 26 2011, 17:07:15 UTC

Gracias! In my brain, it totally went down this way and that helps me sleep at night. Haha. :)

mserrada July 30 2011, 22:40:10 UTC

If only it had gone this way :(

I could definitely see Kara teasing Lee like this and I really liked how he confronted her and didn't let her run away. Liked how you had the trauma of Caprica finally catch up to Kara and Lee was there for her. (extra credit for no Sam references :)

Your Kara & Lee voices are spot-on. So well done!

word_vomity August 2 2011, 20:52:41 UTC

Yay! I even got extra credit?! Baller!!! :)

Things with them were always just one breath away from being right in canon. If only he'd stepped up BEFORE UB. :(

Thanks so much!