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Jul 24, 2008 19:10
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_siren_siren_
July 25 2008, 00:01:04 UTC
this was exactly what i thought you should do.
it shows the emotion and the drive and the will you have to succeed.
it comes off as 'by any means nessassary', which is a huge plus.
i think you wrote 'you' instead of 'your' somewhere in there.
but honestly, i think thats about the only thing wrong with it.
im proud of you.
show her that you can do this.
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it shows the emotion and the drive and the will you have to succeed.
it comes off as 'by any means nessassary', which is a huge plus.
i think you wrote 'you' instead of 'your' somewhere in there.
but honestly, i think thats about the only thing wrong with it.
im proud of you.
show her that you can do this.
Reply
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