Title: Promise of Forever Pairing: SeHun/LuHan Rating: PG13 Summary: "And I cry; not for him, nor for myself, but for the insignificant moment that 'could have been'..."
;~; OH MY GOSH /sobbing why is this so cute and sad and heartwrenching and wonderful Q__Q i love how you portray the emotions. you convey your words beautifully.
He was barely hanging on; to survive, to live. And yet LuHan, his once-upon-a-time fairytale, looked completely whole; a perfect happily ever after.
^/extremely flailing at this part sobs
i was near to tears about how much these 2 need each other. ;~; oh gosh. i love it so much. <3 thank you for writing this. it was absolutely amazing.i love hunhan to bits <33
/sighs i'm never going to be able to write as beautifully as you >.< the part where sehun realizes luhan was actually in the same state as him was brilliant.
yeahhhhhh im actually really pleased that you wrote a sehun and lu han. now i can fangirl you even more because you write all the pairs i ship. what can i say, i went through something similar to this story yet it didn't really turn out the way these two turn out. what they have is mutual and mine was one-sided but i could still feel the pain that sehun was going through. you did a great job bringing that emotion out. you have a very sentiment filled writing style. i love it! :D
XD ahhaha! i can't decide..KaiLu? HunHan? gahhh both are so fabulous♥ lol and aww i feel sad for your unrequited love ;__; i went through something similar too haha
beautiful story is beautiful (: hi! I came here to read your story and to comment...I am so random :< Im sorry.. I just had to tell you that you write very beautifully and no, the ending wasnt bad :) I hope to read more fanfics like this from you ^^
lovely comment is lovely♥ thank you so much! and haha no you're not random at all XD (but dun worry anyways, i welcome randomness lol) thanks for reading! :Db
I am utterly in awe at your writing. The descriptions are so beautiful. ;A; I don't even normally ship people nor read fanfictions on them but this blew me away. The HunHan is perfect!
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why is this so cute and sad and heartwrenching and wonderful Q__Q
i love how you portray the emotions. you convey your words beautifully.
He was barely hanging on; to survive, to live. And yet LuHan, his once-upon-a-time fairytale, looked completely whole; a perfect happily ever after.
^/extremely flailing at this part sobs
i was near to tears about how much these 2 need each other. ;~; oh gosh.
i love it so much. <3 thank you for writing this. it was absolutely amazing.i love hunhan to bits <33
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i'm never going to be able to write as beautifully as you >.<
the part where sehun realizes luhan was actually in the same state as him was brilliant.
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thanks so much for reading! :3♥
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thanks for reading! :D
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hi! I came here to read your story and to comment...I am so random :< Im sorry.. I just had to tell you that you write very beautifully and no, the ending wasnt bad :)
I hope to read more fanfics like this from you ^^
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thanks for reading! :Db
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I don't even normally ship people nor read fanfictions on them but this blew me away.
The HunHan is perfect!
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