[Oneshot] Promise of Forever

Mar 24, 2012 22:33

Title: Promise of Forever
Pairing: SeHun/LuHan
Rating: PG13
Summary:                   "And I cry; not for him, nor for myself,
but for the insignificant moment that 'could have been'..."

Promise of Forever )

sehun/luhan, exo, fic: promise of forever

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maknaelover12 March 25 2012, 06:41:18 UTC
;~; OH MY GOSH /sobbing
why is this so cute and sad and heartwrenching and wonderful Q__Q
i love how you portray the emotions. you convey your words beautifully.

He was barely hanging on; to survive, to live. And yet LuHan, his once-upon-a-time fairytale, looked completely whole; a perfect happily ever after.

^/extremely flailing at this part sobs

i was near to tears about how much these 2 need each other. ;~; oh gosh.
i love it so much. <3 thank you for writing this. it was absolutely amazing.i love hunhan to bits <33

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dustyfairy April 7 2012, 19:02:01 UTC
♥awww gosh thanks so much! i'm glad that you enjoyed reading this! \(^ㅂ^)/ thank you!

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caroselle March 25 2012, 11:58:31 UTC
/sighs
i'm never going to be able to write as beautifully as you >.<
the part where sehun realizes luhan was actually in the same state as him was brilliant.

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dustyfairy April 7 2012, 19:04:00 UTC
>////< seriously, i'm not that good of a writer. you praise me too much D:
thanks so much for reading! :3♥

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ohrice March 25 2012, 14:36:56 UTC
yeahhhhhh im actually really pleased that you wrote a sehun and lu han. now i can fangirl you even more because you write all the pairs i ship. what can i say, i went through something similar to this story yet it didn't really turn out the way these two turn out. what they have is mutual and mine was one-sided but i could still feel the pain that sehun was going through. you did a great job bringing that emotion out. you have a very sentiment filled writing style. i love it! :D

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dustyfairy April 7 2012, 19:05:34 UTC
XD ahhaha! i can't decide..KaiLu? HunHan? gahhh both are so fabulous♥ lol and aww i feel sad for your unrequited love ;__; i went through something similar too haha

thanks for reading! :D

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delliemin March 25 2012, 16:11:38 UTC
beautiful story is beautiful (:
hi! I came here to read your story and to comment...I am so random :< Im sorry.. I just had to tell you that you write very beautifully and no, the ending wasnt bad :)
I hope to read more fanfics like this from you ^^

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dustyfairy April 7 2012, 19:06:25 UTC
lovely comment is lovely♥ thank you so much! and haha no you're not random at all XD (but dun worry anyways, i welcome randomness lol)
thanks for reading! :Db

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yabucchi March 31 2012, 05:43:16 UTC
I am utterly in awe at your writing. The descriptions are so beautiful. ;A;
I don't even normally ship people nor read fanfictions on them but this blew me away.
The HunHan is perfect!

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dustyfairy April 7 2012, 19:07:16 UTC
;ㅂ; aww gosh thanks so much for your comment and for reading! i'm glad that this was to your liking! o(^^)o

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