[oneshot] Dance with the Devil

May 07, 2012 22:20



Title: Dance with the Devil
Pairing: SeHun / LuHan
Rating: PG13 - R
Summary: "You can whisper to me the language of love. As I show you the dance of love."

dance with the devil )

sehun/luhan, exo, fic: dance with the devil

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dustyfairy May 8 2012, 05:41:53 UTC
a/n:
and also...
this oneshot of mine is a rather fail though...
written with a bare plot and minimal effort. 
ugh?
holes...i swear there are holes in this story /sobs

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ohrice May 8 2012, 05:50:59 UTC
i spot this! and i WILL READ NAO omg you ;_;

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ohrice May 8 2012, 06:06:16 UTC
i had no idea i was holding my breath while reading this but damn..this has got to be the hottest piece you wrote and probably it's because of how lustful hunhan are. i really like the plot, it's new! no one really write this kind of plot and you wrote it well. it's not awkward and you wrote it as though you know the dance. do you know salsa? xD imagine if this was argentine tango phew~~ firee XD no but really, sehun in here is so sexy. omg. flapping the bottom of his shirt to cool himself. sweating everywhere, collarbones, licking his lips, omg -dies- no wonder luhan just give in so easily. great job julie!

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kpopsk8rgrl1 May 8 2012, 18:33:49 UTC
Puh-leez. Don't doubt yourself, this was SOOOO GOOD OTL it was so hot and I loved Kai's attitude xD

I will not kick you  ಠ_ಠ

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yoake_no_sora May 8 2012, 19:25:54 UTC
ndgaldjnfl

What fail do you speak of? I don't think you and fail live in the same universe.

This was beautiful as always. And Kai was great. XD

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fromearthtostar May 9 2012, 01:05:27 UTC
I love this! So sensuous, so... exquisite *speaks with a french accent that linguistics major luhan would be ashamed of

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envybleedsgreen May 9 2012, 01:27:26 UTC
/sobbing. This is beautiful.

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