Title: Dance with the Devil Pairing: SeHun / LuHan Rating: PG13 - R Summary: "You can whisper to me the language of love. As I show you the dance of love."
a/n: and also... this oneshot of mine is a rather fail though... written with a bare plot and minimal effort. ugh? holes...i swear there are holes in this story /sobs
i had no idea i was holding my breath while reading this but damn..this has got to be the hottest piece you wrote and probably it's because of how lustful hunhan are. i really like the plot, it's new! no one really write this kind of plot and you wrote it well. it's not awkward and you wrote it as though you know the dance. do you know salsa? xD imagine if this was argentine tango phew~~ firee XD no but really, sehun in here is so sexy. omg. flapping the bottom of his shirt to cool himself. sweating everywhere, collarbones, licking his lips, omg -dies- no wonder luhan just give in so easily. great job julie!
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and also...
this oneshot of mine is a rather fail though...
written with a bare plot and minimal effort.
ugh?
holes...i swear there are holes in this story /sobs
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I will not kick you ಠ_ಠ
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What fail do you speak of? I don't think you and fail live in the same universe.
This was beautiful as always. And Kai was great. XD
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