[exo] natura non contristatur (nature is not saddened)

[dustyfairy]

Title: natura non contristatur (nature is not saddened)
Pairing: Chanyeol / Baekhyun
Rating: PG
Summary: a short drabble for the aideshou challenge 03

Comments

[orangefriday]

I apologize - I don't know who these characters are and I don't read K-pop fiction (and I don't even know if there's a term for it!). Just pretend I'm a foreigner from Mars, invading Earth, or "soft mother earth, the warm presence of gaia enveloping him with a sense of fertility and life". I was brought here by somebody else who does read it.

But anyway, wow. This was beautiful. So, amazingly well-written. The descriptions gripped my heart and just - ohmygod. Wow. I loved this so much! I want to hang it somewhere and show it off to everybody because it's like a picture, beautiful and beyond words.

Thank you so much for writing this!

[dustyfairy]

;______; oh my gosh. i dont know how you, or your friend, came by this odd piece of writing, but thank you so much for your words! gosh, i'm touched that you think so highly of this tbh ;;; i haven't expected anyone to really take notice or favorite something like this lol again, thank you for your time and for liking this \(; u ;)/ hope you have a fantastic day^^

[sendandreceive]

ahhh this is gorgeous. i hung on every word and your style is beautiful, i love it. also i love the correlation between the sun and fire and ugh it makes my baekyeol feels hurt but IN A GOOD WAY.
just... lovely lovely lovely, saving this <3

[dustyfairy]

/spluttering/ o-o-omg YOU D8 um. uh. UH. HI HELLO. first off can i just get out there that i'm a fan of your writing like. ALOT. like... silent reader who just quietly fangirls over your stories? ohgosh i hope im not sounding awkward ;;; almost choked on my water when i read your comment tbh ;;; thank you so much for reading and liking this ;a; i'm honoured to have one of my favorite writers comment on my writing OTL this week. idk what's with this week but i've just been meeting alot of my fav writers lately /sobbing/

thank you so much for your kind words \(; u ;)/
and i just want to get it out now that i really enjoy your work as well!

[sendandreceive]

YOU ARE TOO CUTE omfg, ive been following you for like ever too but you NEVER KNEW GUESS WHOS CREEPY NOW. we even follow each other on tumblr otl (im the crazy samsung laptop person)

and yes yes i like your writing a lot, and have for a while now. this one stuck with me though. its a very visual thing you do, i can visualize a lot of what you put down... sensory writing i guess you could say, idk im not very good at explaining why i like things but yes very very good <3

[dustyfairy]

O.O omfg SERIOUSLY. SERIOUSLY?! /mindblown/ well i guess your dp's are the same on here and on tumblr. but. OH WOW. I FEEL DUMB PUAHAHA XDDD

chelsea, right? :'D HAI OMFG if i knew this sooner i would've said something back then too OTL
(and btw still really thankful and grateful that you came to my rescue about the laptop thing (; u ;) you're talented AND super nice asjfl;)

and gosh, thank you for your kind words (; o ;) "sensory writing" oooohhh you make what i do sound so fancy omg \(>///<)/ thank you!!<3 btw do you have twitter? i would love to follow you there too (; u ;) i'm @baekfetish

[silkekim]

At first I was like "maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, this looks loooong, something something, nature, maaah, the sun and winds and nature-stuff, maaah,", but I think somewhere around (read: "exactly from the point of:")
"He falls to his knees with a subtle thump, the moist dirt softening the land against his frail knees. His lips part with a silent sigh"
I was captured. Like... this is what happens. when you fall to your knees. Exactly. This is how you feel it physically. the subtle thump is what you hear, the moist dirt is what you feel. And if you do this, you're in a place mentally, where it's either a sigh or a cry. I just simply loved how you wrote that, because it made me feel like I did, without any big emotions, but with actions. I made me feel sad the way Baekhyun feels sad ;_;

and by then, I stopped being a brat, read it from the beginning, and really loved everything. Every little word.

[dustyfairy]

(; ________ ;) uhhh oh gosh. thank you for this. this comment just.... wow something about the way you worded this just made me read it over and over again. i feel so touched (; u ;) thank you for your generous words, gosh, im glad that this caught your eye enough for you to read it ;;

again, thank you for reading and commenting! ^^

[silkekim]

God, I must write comments far better than I write fics then, kekekekeke. But honestly, you deserve ALL THE PRAISE~!

actually, I was reading all the entries for aideshou's challenge, trying to decide which one to vote for. Already by the second fic, I was getting tired/bored though, so I was really happy when this story turned out to be something special~~

[dustyfairy]

i've been planning on reading all the aideshou fics, as well as the runandgun ones, but just haven't found the time to sit down and read most of them ;;n;; are you entered in aideshou as well? oh gosh i would love to read your story (; u ;) i'll probably get some reading time later on haha well i'm very happy to know this was enjoyable for you ;; i honestly didnt expect much with this writing tbh ^^;; thank you~~

[dustyfairy]

oh my gosh would it be alright if i just clung to you for a second and just.... cry out my feels? i don't think i've EVER gotten such a detailed and gutwrenching(in a good way!) comment about my writing. like. seriously i'm still rereading this and just at awe that you have enjoyed this short passage so much. thank you for reading, and for recommending this to your friend. (i'm rather speechless atm so an early apology for this soon to be incoherent reply lol) but in all seriousness i don't think i deserve such praise ;____; reading your comment had me go "really? i made you feel this? asdfjkl;" or "omg what is this fabulous vocabulary i'm not worthy of" OTL but i honestly thank you for such kind and uplifting words, it just makes me extremely happy to have known someone has enjoyed my writing to this extent (; u ;) omg i fail at trying to make a nice reply. this doesn't convey my feels for you and this comment asdfjk;

and gosh, no apology needed! i'm touched you even came back to reply again (; ~~~~ ;)
thank you so much. ♥

[dustyfairy]

D: whaaa----never!! it's the thought that counts :'D i love your comment too. thank you so much♥

[dustyfairy]

\(; _________________ ;)/ ♥ ♥ omgg thank youuuuuuuu