Freefalling Kisses ~The Story - (3/?)

[dustyfairy]

Title: Freefalling Kisses ~The Story
Pairing: Kai/LuHan, &more to come
Summary:"I believe that two people are connected at the heart, and it doesn't matter what you do, or who you are, or where you live; there are no boundaries or barriers if two people are destined to be together."
Rating:PG13 (subject to possibly change later on). **AU!verse
*this

Comments

[ohrice]

yay i spot again!!!! i stalk this place omg xD so happy

[ohrice]

i should have been sleeping, but i had a feeling you were going to post. i seriously enjoyed the comedic interaction between baekhyun and kyungsoo. and it was definitely smart and in character that they have their own secret language, which made me giggle like a school girl. i love that you picked lay instead of anyone else as somewhat of the mafia leader. he emits this elegant air, has soft features, which is perfect in contrast with his role as the villain. like you said, even the bad guys have reasons to be bad ^^ i anticipate the meeting between kai and luhan but i think that wont be happening until probably 2 or 3 more chapters. i could be wrong. i have a weird hunch that somehow kai is connected to this mafia thing mainly because of the info the tortured victim gave and also the ending of the last chapter. either way i still really enjoyed this one. ill keep watch for another update! woot!

[dustyfairy]

ugh. you just nit-pick at my fic and make it sound like this amazing thing (^A^)/ you're so sweet~!! thanks so much for liking and commenting this fic :3 makes me happy to have such an enthusiasic reader \^ㅁ^/ yay!

hehe well, guess you'll have to see what i have in store later on, and see just how accurate you are ;D i'm not the one to give it away so easily XD

[choikang_kpop]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm good. :)