So glad to see that you're back!senseofpeaceAugust 5 2006, 16:53:02 UTC
I missed you! I am one of your Reconciliation fans. I periodically check your LJ to see how your RL is going. I am keeping you in my thoughts, you have really been going through a tough time these past months. ((big hug)). Anyway, you're a wonderful talent who told such a sweet story, despite everything that was going on in your RL. I appreciate your sharing Reconciliation with all of us. Much love.
glad to see you are backjudy_blue_catAugust 6 2006, 00:07:07 UTC
Hi, wordsmith, it's so nice to have you back again. I've really missed you and your wonderful story. I'm sorry that your personal life is so painful, but you make it sound entertaining enough for a story in its own right.
I have a special request, if it doesn't interfere with your story line. Jake is fairly verbal and articulate, but Heph is pretty closed-mouthed and he keeps up his stoic personna even during the sex scenes. We've heard him say only one thing. When Jake said, "You feel so good," Heph replied, "You have no idea." That's a positive, appreciative (and verbally humorous) statement, but it lacks detail. Can you write a segment in which we get to know what Heph thinks and feels during sex, even if he doesn't say it aloud?
Good to see you in lj land again! Three cheers to you for joining the WW program! I hope it'll do you heaps of good. It's supposed to be a very protective and supportive environment.
I have been checking your journal regularly, worrying about you. I'm glad to hear you sound as strong and in charge as ever. I am holding my thumbs for you and your folks and look forward to chapter 26.
Ecstatic to see you back!simone_42August 10 2006, 02:21:13 UTC
Hey Wordsmithslash- I know you mentioned that you have a regular beta who proofs your work, but in your message above, it sounds like you are proofing your own work right now. Because I really enjoy your story and appreciate you sharing it with us, I would be happy to assist with proofing if that would be at all helpful to you. Let me know, I would love to be able to give back in some way. Jen.
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I have a special request, if it doesn't interfere with your story line. Jake is fairly verbal and articulate, but Heph is pretty closed-mouthed and he keeps up his stoic personna even during the sex scenes. We've heard him say only one thing. When Jake said, "You feel so good," Heph replied, "You have no idea." That's a positive, appreciative (and verbally humorous) statement, but it lacks detail. Can you write a segment in which we get to know what Heph thinks and feels during sex, even if he doesn't say it aloud?
Judy
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I'm glad you got your files back! :) And regarding the proofreading, I'd be more than glad to beta read for you!!! :) :) :)
Take care,
Wendy
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I have been checking your journal regularly, worrying about you. I'm glad to hear you sound as strong and in charge as ever. I am holding my thumbs for you and your folks and look forward to chapter 26.
Welcome back, wordsmithslash!
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I know you mentioned that you have a regular beta who proofs your work, but in your message above, it sounds like you are proofing your own work right now. Because I really enjoy your story and appreciate you sharing it with us, I would be happy to assist with proofing if that would be at all helpful to you. Let me know, I would love to be able to give back in some way. Jen.
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