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otterandterrier November 20 2010, 02:30:48 UTC
Oh, this was so beautiful!
I loved the insert of Bill's conversation with Ron, and the metaphor! Lovely drabble for such a cute scene.

Haha, can't believe you wrote this when you got back from the movie!! I arrived home at 3am on Thursday, and as I ate half a sandwich, I looked for something very random in internet... u.u I was so trembling still.

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wordsmithsonian November 20 2010, 05:37:58 UTC
I was just SO pumped after the movie that I couldn't sleep! I kept playing the piano scene over and over in my head until this little ficlet was born!

I have to see it again soon, omg!

Thanks for commenting, doll!

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lectura35 November 20 2010, 03:01:09 UTC
This moment is gorgeous!
I loved how you entered Ron´s mind and his brotherly interaction with Bill. (I love Bill as big brother ;)
And I always enjoy Ron´s swing between tenderness and lust. I just love that boy so much!
Wonderful job, Anna!

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wordsmithsonian November 20 2010, 05:40:29 UTC
Thank you!
I adore Weasley sibling interaction, and I never really write Bill, so...here he is!
"swing between tenderness and lust" is a perfect way to describe it, Ron is so...guh.

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urbanmama1 November 20 2010, 03:53:24 UTC
This was fantastic, Anna. I love how her little piano lesson reminded him of his convo with Bill, who is not only handsome but helpful too! I kept waiting for him to describe Fleur in musical terms, but perhaps he's too gentlemanly to make an allusion to his bride-to-be. The last line is the heart of the matter isn't it? "Harry needed them, and the world needed Harry." That's why I truly believe that while the Wizarding World will always idolize Harry, Harry will always idolize Ron and Hermione, who were not only willing to sacrifice their lives, but also their love for each other, to help him!

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wordsmithsonian November 20 2010, 05:42:53 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you like it!

"That's why I truly believe that while the Wizarding World will always idolize Harry, Harry will always idolize Ron and Hermione, who were not only willing to sacrifice their lives, but also their love for each other, to help him!"

Exactly. Harry is the only person who will ever truly understand the magnitude of the sacrifice his friends so willingly made for him.
...Now I want to write a trio fic, lol!

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tmblue February 25 2011, 21:28:40 UTC
Okay, I'm jumping in here real quick because the line you quoted just now from urbanmama... YES. Just so much YES.

And yeahhhh, you see how it goes with the trio fic ideas... haha

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wordsmithsonian February 25 2011, 23:00:56 UTC
I know, she is brilliant!

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exartemarte February 25 2011, 10:29:10 UTC
Anyway, so in the case of your, shall we say, rather tightly strung instrument, you’ll want to start off slow and gentle.

I love it!

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wordsmithsonian February 25 2011, 16:27:08 UTC
Thanks!

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tmblue February 25 2011, 21:27:16 UTC
//One of the seemingly unbreakable chains binding them into this torturous limbo of not-quite-together.

How. did. I. miss. this??

THANK YOU, R/Hr Awards!!

WOO! This is wonderful :D

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wordsmithsonian February 25 2011, 23:02:00 UTC
Yay! Thanks for reading, I was really shocked that this found its way into the noms, lol!

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