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wordsmithsonian

Birthday Ficlet for Mugglemama! We <3 You!

Mar 23, 2011 16:05

( Happy Birthday, mugglemama! )

Comments 10

bendleshnitz1 March 24 2011, 01:11:53 UTC

This was so great! SO THEM! Great job, guys!

urbanmama1 March 24 2011, 01:46:48 UTC

Gracias! Special kudos to Anna who had to write the NC-17 bits, since I'm too much of a novice to do it.

wordsmithsonian March 24 2011, 20:55:33 UTC

Whee! Thanks! And I'm of the opinion that the naughty bits are simply fun! (but thanks anyway for the special kudos, darling urbanmama1!)

mugglemama March 24 2011, 01:36:27 UTC

SQUEE!!!!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you - this was sooooooo wonderful! I love the connection and longing at the beginning leading up to Hermione giving into her instincts and seizing the moment (and Ron) so perfectly. You two are so awesome -- I'm so lucky to have such talented and marvelous friends like you!

*twirls you both*

urbanmama1 March 24 2011, 01:49:50 UTC

Soooo glad you liked it! We had a lovely time collaborating FOR YOU! We both love you dearly :-)

wordsmithsonian March 24 2011, 20:57:02 UTC

YAY! Happy Birthday!!
Ron and Hermione wish you well along with us, of course!

Thanks for everything you do, we <3 you to absolute pieces!

lectura35 March 24 2011, 09:09:29 UTC

"If you keep talking about jelly legs and you know, then I'll you know, and we won't make it out of bed ---"

Awww... I love him :)

Then I do close my eyes, letting the strokes of his fingers lull me into that all-too-familiar haze of our mutual desire.

Just melting :)

So beautiful job, girls! This was lovely, hot, and I enjoyed every minute of their interaction together.

Congrats to both of you... and lucky the birthday girl ;)

wordsmithsonian March 24 2011, 20:59:07 UTC

I know, don't you just love the whole "jelly-legs" thing urbanmama1 came up with!? It's so freakin' adorable!

Thanks for reading, we had too much fun working together on this!

napchic March 24 2011, 20:27:00 UTC

"He's no longer smirking. He's waiting -- I can tell by how his breathing has changed."
oh, i do love a sexy, anticipatory breathing pattern. oh my, but I do.

"I want you. Now, Ron." She whispers in my ear, sending my blood whistling through me like a boiling kettle."
I just adore that line. Terrific imagery.

"I run my hands up her legs, wrapping my arms beneath her arse as I stand, lifting her up with me, eliciting a little surprised gasp out of her that I somehow seem to hear with my cock."
Ron's cock would have acute hearing.
*adds to canon*

"As I watch, holding my breath, something shifts in her face, something wild and satisfied, almost predatory."
hell yes.

"The rest of my clothing vanishes abruptly, my ears left burning after performing such strong nonverbal magic, such a revealing loss of control."
okay, LOVEs that.

"We curl together like hot rolls in a pan, sticking together at the edges as I throw my arm around her, my hand resting on her heart."
OMG. I love that. Perfect image.

"I consider lifting my face but ( ... )

wordsmithsonian March 24 2011, 21:01:31 UTC

Your reviews make me smile!

I'm also of the firm belief that Ron's cock has many capabilities, the least of which is acute hearing...

It was loads of fun to work with urbanmama1 on this, and I'm so glad that you liked our end result, thanks for reading!