Ughhh and my hatred for Levrrier intensifies XDDD Oh goodness, he's just one of those characters that is so ridiculously easy to hate =__=;;;
Road weirds me out with her childlike manner, but that's not surprise.
KANDA AND ALMA. I like how Alma here is still cognizant. And I like how you wrote his confusion. :D And his preference for long-haired Yuu. heheheh. And I love how in-character he is, selectively remembering Yuu as kind, gentle and shy XDDDD
All in all, engrossing chapter--can't wait for more :DDDD
XD I know. The moment I saw his face I was like "HITLERWHUT!? D<" I just keep hating him... XD
I am overly fond of Road, so she's not quite as ruthless as she is in the manga. XD
Well, I started writing this before the flashbacks in the manga, so after chapter 187 the stories are completely different. In FWTBT, Kanda is a LOT different than his manga counterpart. XD
Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear it. Since this was mostly filler, I was worried it would be boring. ^^;
Very nice. I really like your characterization of Alma! ^^ I'm really excited for the next chapter! Be better than us and update soon, okay? ;)
There's just one mistake that was just kinda glaring at me: but without anyway to fight Wisely’s mental attacks. Anyway should be any way. That is all. ^^
I'll update as soon as I get my huge autobiography out of the way, heh. After that, I don't have anything else going on so I'll be able to get it up soon. ^^
I'm experimenting with Alma, so I'm glad you like him. ^^
Bah. I read this over so many times and found so many mistakes, I'm surprised that's the only one that you noticed, lol. Thank you, I'll go fix it. ^^
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And I wrote that it was Central before they started the flashback in the manga, so I'm just going to stick with it. ^^
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Road weirds me out with her childlike manner, but that's not surprise.
KANDA AND ALMA. I like how Alma here is still cognizant. And I like how you wrote his confusion. :D And his preference for long-haired Yuu. heheheh. And I love how in-character he is, selectively remembering Yuu as kind, gentle and shy XDDDD
All in all, engrossing chapter--can't wait for more :DDDD
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I am overly fond of Road, so she's not quite as ruthless as she is in the manga. XD
Well, I started writing this before the flashbacks in the manga, so after chapter 187 the stories are completely different. In FWTBT, Kanda is a LOT different than his manga counterpart. XD
Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear it. Since this was mostly filler, I was worried it would be boring. ^^;
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There's just one mistake that was just kinda glaring at me: but without anyway to fight Wisely’s mental attacks. Anyway should be any way. That is all. ^^
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I'm experimenting with Alma, so I'm glad you like him. ^^
Bah. I read this over so many times and found so many mistakes, I'm surprised that's the only one that you noticed, lol. Thank you, I'll go fix it. ^^
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