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[EXO] [Fanfiction] In Motion

Oct 26, 2012 00:29

Title: In Motion
Pairing: Junmyeon/Kyungsoo/Jongin (SuDoKai)
Rating: NC-17
Length: 2,536 words
Summary: Dance rooms and horny boys go hand in hand.

( The marked difference in their various states of undress is glaringly obvious because the mirrors reflect and show every single thing and Kyungsoo is biting his lip as he stares at Jongin. )

fanfiction, fandom: exo, pairing: suho/kyungsoo/kai, oneshot, rating: nc-17

Comments 16

i_know_ur_type October 26 2012, 21:43:57 UTC

First of all OMG THIS WAS FREAKIN' HOT ><
and the mirrors OH GAWD just awesome
I love the way you write a very detailed smut :) but then again you still capture some sweetness for e.g. this => "...Junmyeon pulls out of him, kissing his forehead and pulling him out of Jongin before pushing him gently to the side."
Also I absolutely LOVE dominant Junmyeon.
Good job girl :) you never fail to capture my OT3
Thanks for writing ^^

pikachancalok October 27 2012, 09:38:48 UTC

leave it to the pro smut writer and your cold night will be warmed up by this freaking hot smut.
and i love slutty kyungsoo. gosh.

knackchan08 October 29 2012, 15:02:08 UTC

this was so hot omfg, you write the best porn i swear

BLESS YOU

THIS IS KITTY kandyse_c December 8 2012, 19:02:08 UTC

OH GOD I HATE U PRACTICE ROOM SEX

SDFGHSDFGHSDFGHJSDFJX its horrible ok. ITS SO FUCKING HORRIBLE

I AM MEWLING AT THIS IDE WHAT DID I READ AND KYUNGSOO STAY BOTTOM FOREVER. BUT IF ITS KAISOO... IDK BUT YEAH STAY BOTTOM FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRR

but i still love u flo.

tiggie0307 December 20 2012, 18:45:42 UTC

I CAN't. OMGOSH. I. JUST. UAHH

WHAT ARE WORDS IF THERE IS NONE TO SAY HOW THIS HAS MADE MY DAD THAT MUCH BETTER!!