Comments | world_inverted: Mankind Should Be Our Business, chp. 5

world_inverted

Mankind Should Be Our Business, chp. 5

Dec 29, 2012 17:29

By the time the sun comes up, Sherlock has retreated deep into his mind palace. There’s too much new information- he needs it catalogued and put away safely, where it won’t be lost or ignored. He’s cradled each moment in his hand like a gem, extrapolating every bit of data possible. What it tells him is clear; how to deal with it is less obvious.( Read more... )

fic, mankind should be our business, sherlock/john

Comments 6

exbex December 30 2012, 02:21:19 UTC

This is wonderful; romantic and in-character. I hope to see more fic from you in the future.

world_inverted December 30 2012, 02:56:41 UTC

Thank you so much! Keeping Sherlock in-character was definitely a struggle in places, so I'm glad you thought so!

sunny_rainfall December 30 2012, 20:24:00 UTC

The future one is horrifying. Glad it never happened

world_inverted December 30 2012, 23:12:59 UTC

God, me too! It was hard enough to write knowing I was going to fix it in the next chapter- I don't know how people write angst.

durffy January 3 2013, 20:47:47 UTC

FANTASTIC!!

Honestly, I was reading as fast as I could, even though I knew what the general plot would be. Like: "OMG!! What happens next?! What happens next?!"

The last poetic paragraph made me well up--it was so touching and lyrical! The whole story is in character and so well-written!!

Very, very much looking forward to more fic from you!

world_inverted January 3 2013, 22:27:56 UTC

Well, aren't you the sweetest thing?! Thank you- this just made my whole day.