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Of Distant Dark Places

Jan 06, 2013 00:12

Title: Of Distant Dark Places
Status of work: Complete
Characters and/or pairings: Sherlock/John
Rating: R
Length: 1024
Author's note: Title from the lovely "Set Fire to the Third Bar," by Snow Patrol

Summary: In the halls of his mind palace, hidden away in the center of the labyrinth, light glows underneath a solitary door. It might have been a ( Read more... )

fic, sherlock, sherlock/john

Comments 4

arianedevere January 6 2013, 11:47:06 UTC

Oh wow, that is gorgeous. What a beautiful use of Sherlock's mind palace.

world_inverted January 7 2013, 02:31:01 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

rifleman_s January 8 2013, 13:27:15 UTC

”Pulls down carefully-built walls and demolishes boundaries until both flesh and thoughts are electric with awareness and exposure.”

and

”As always, his eye captures everything the casual observer would have missed, and the hushed potential of this moment makes him ache.”

Are among some of the other gorgeous lines you’ve created here, which paint such a picture of longing ...

What a beautiful piece of writing, absolutely capturing Sherlock and his mind palace.

world_inverted January 8 2013, 23:00:19 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment! I'm so glad to hear that the imagery worked for you!