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[ranchangrnl]

Title: Pumpkin Eater
Word Count: 100
Character: Wormtail
Challenge: Pumpkin
A/N: I tried something a bit different. I'm not sure if the drabble really works but I'll put it up for criticism. I think it's the last line that makes me feel it's a bit cheesy. But hey, even the best horror flicks are cheese so maybe it works for Halloween.

Peter

Comments

[ani_bester]

Oh geez that was powerful. Amazing.
It's simple unbelievable what canb e done with a few worda and you did it beautifully here.

I love the sick use of the nursery ryhme here. Good lord.

[ranchangrnl]

I'm so very glad it didn't come across as the cheese I thought it was and more of the creepy-ew factor that I was aiming for.

Yeah, the nursery rhyme was what started it all. Some of the creepiest things are demented takes on children's rhymes and songs.

[theladyfeylene]

That is seriously creepy and in a very good way. Gah! I enjoyed it.

[ranchangrnl]

I must be on a creepy bent. I don't know whether to worry about that or not. Ahh well, at least it was enjoyable. :D

[lennaofmidearth]

Wow, that was creepy. And quite good. I've really enjoyed all the drabbles you've posted here.

I'd also like to say how much I love your Percy at IB. I hope you don't mind if I friend you.

[ranchangrnl]

Don't mind at all as long as you don't mind me friending you back.

Ah, Percy, that git. Hehe, I'm glad you like him, though.

I think I'm just in a creepy vibe this month. Creepy Halloweenie is good. Glad you liked it. :D