Week 11 topic - "What is your favourite daydream, and why?"

Mar 06, 2004 19:04

Title: Hunger
Pairings: PP/RL, SB/RL
Rating: R

Just a little belated Remus/Peter smut for ficbymarksPeter peered out of the portrait hole and slipped the cloak over his head before stepping out of Gryffindor Tower. It was draughty out in the corridor, an icy breeze giving him goosebumps where his legs were growing too long for his pyjamas, and he was ( Read more... )

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fluffyllama March 6 2004, 20:04:55 UTC
Well, it's so late in coming that it doens't count for today's tally really ;-) I just got stuck and couldn't get my brain to make it work until I thought aha the daydream...

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gmth March 6 2004, 20:36:00 UTC
Waaaaahhhhhhh! I don't know why, but this makes me so sad! I do love the hints of resentment toward Sirius so very, very much. And poor, sweet ickle Peter... *ptooey*! I don't wanna look at him that way! Stop it, you evil, evil woman, you!

*grumbles and sniffs*

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fluffyllama March 6 2004, 20:55:22 UTC
I do love the hints of resentment toward Sirius so very, very much

*grin* And poor Sirius just doesn't know what's hit him, and definitely has no clue what Peter's problem is ;-)

And poor, sweet ickle Peter... *ptooey*! I don't wanna look at him that way!

You can only fight it for so long before succumbing to the Peter love, you know ;-)

Hope you're feeling a bit better, too.

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ani_bester March 8 2004, 04:41:20 UTC
Ah wow, I love how you give hints to fractures starting widen between Peter and everyone else, especially centering around Siriu's teasing.

I'm a huge Peter/Remus fan and since my art normally gets a rather surprised/negative response I'm very ecstatic to see a relationship between these two play apart in your fics. I think most people would ahve him pining for James.

I know you can't do this because of the muse thing and all, but I wish I knew what the heck was going through Remus's head!
It's seems nearly as cruel as what Sirius does, though in a different, and perhaps less intentional manner.

Anyway, you've played the relationship very well in other fics, and your characterization for Peter is always excellent. ^__^

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fluffyllama March 8 2004, 10:00:16 UTC
Thank you very much! Yes, I wanted to give Peter a slightly different relationship with each of his friends, that hopefully builds up slowly to explain how I see them. So James is his hero (too untouchable even for him to fantasise about, as far as the pining for him goes, but there is a definite crush there), Sirius is the one he's slightly afraid of because his teasing has that cruel streak, and Remus is the one he consciously thinks of least or can't be bothered to impress to start with, even though (or maybe because) he could understand him best.

While I can't give Remus' thoughts as such, some of the scenarios I'm waiting for an excuse to write will shed some light on them, I promise :-) But you're right, there is still an element of cruelty there, and Remus isn't much better than Sirius, just different.

I'm glad you have enjoyed these so far :-) And - you do Peter/Remus art?! Linky, please? *pants in anticipation* I can promise ecstatically happy reactions here!

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ani_bester March 8 2004, 15:10:53 UTC
I can't wait for future installments ^__^

As for Peter/Remus art, from oldest to newest:

Teaching
This one isn't quite slash as they're first years, but it's cute.

Lovers
Slash, and they're not supoosed to be as young as the look. One of the issues I have with my art is people tend to look too much like children.

Study break
Slash =P

And if you're interested, I wrote one Remus/Peter fanfic

It never hurts to Try

Anyway, like i said, I'm thrilled to see this pairing dealt with in such a mature and well written way ^__^

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