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Jan 30, 2010 00:19



Emily was so glad to be out of the office and with people. She looked around the bar at the happy faces and the laughter. It lifted her heart to see that the world went on, that the horror she saw day after day hadn't leaked into the world at large.

She slipped into a stool at the bar. "Corona Please" the bar tender was waiting for her order. He ( Read more... )

criminal minds, emily/jj

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ymmat09 January 31 2010, 02:00:23 UTC
nice job! One of my favourite pairings. Emily's pov great!

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mozzdi February 3 2010, 04:06:02 UTC
My favourite pair....good story and great writing. Glad JJ woke up and went to Em. Some funny lines, keep writing these two please.

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worst_liar_ever February 3 2010, 09:17:34 UTC
Thanks again.
There can never be too much Emily and JJ. The season is back in Australia as of tonight!! *joy*

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malexfaith February 4 2010, 00:52:24 UTC
This is great. Great descriptions, specially on the feelings and emotions. Loved it. Thanks heaps for sharing

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worst_liar_ever February 5 2010, 09:41:23 UTC
Thanks!
Look forward to more from this pair! Especially since the show is back on the air in Australia!

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ladyrashida February 8 2010, 11:24:39 UTC
Nicely done, especially if this is your first fic. I like the twist that in your story it's JJ who goes for the Doppelgänger. Don't think I've read that before.

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worst_liar_ever February 8 2010, 12:40:49 UTC
Thanks - It usually is Emily isn't it. I think Emily would be too controlled to give in to that. That's my opinion anyway.

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