tvd fic: do you sleep? (caroline/damon)

Feb 14, 2011 22:38

Sometimes you have dreams.

That’s one of those things no one ever told you. That vampires have dreams. Really scary ones, too, nightmares that you never could have conceived when you were human. About coughing up blood that isn’t yours, or coffin lids slamming down and clawing and clawing at the wood until your fingernails bleed. Where the pain ( Read more... )

fanfiction, caroline/damon, tvd

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vega_of_lyre February 15 2011, 04:19:30 UTC
This was excellent! Thanks for writing. I don't normally like second-person but I thought it came through really well here. It felt like an accurate character moment for them.

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wr1t3rbl0ck3d February 15 2011, 06:28:44 UTC
:D Thanks! I really enjoy writing in the second person. It tends to draw the reader in better than anything else. I was worried that they would be out of character, so I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for your comment!

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simply_aly February 15 2011, 09:34:49 UTC
Aww, so sad and cute at the same time. I loved the use of the second person narrative, made it so much more raw.

You almost give up hope that he’ll respond before he wraps an arm around your shoulders and holds you tight.

^I love supportive!Damon.

(I need more Damon/Caroline in my life right now--they're so awesome together!)

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distant_lines February 24 2011, 03:27:23 UTC
This was awesome!

I keep waiting and hoping that we will have a scene like this at some point. Damon and Caroline have never addressed the fact that she's still alive because of his blood, and I really wish they would.

This fits Caroline and Damon so well. I loved it!

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xcoolscorpx March 8 2011, 04:13:00 UTC
I loved this XD we need more D/C scenes on the show, i miss them.

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