All right, 10 more ficlets for
stargatefic100. Same deal as the last time: time limit, post as is, slash marked, yadda. Thanks to
teddibear for pointing out my f-ups.
Table is
hereProgress: 20/100
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Prompt #82 - if, PG, Children of the Gods, AU, 403 words )
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This got me especially:
The first time Jack kills for him, on his orders, Daniel knows he’s won.
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That's officially the coolest feedback I've ever gotten. *VBG*
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Thank you very much! :D
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So I'll just say I liked them all very much. :-)
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You run the gamut here. Nicely done. A few grammatical misses (I can point them out if you want) but overall bang on stuff. My poor boys. *hugs them*
Man I love your work. *smooch* And just think only 80 left to go! *weg*
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I can point them out if you want
That would be lovely. I know I've been a complete slacker on these. Getting them all done is so frickin' painful that I can't even give 'em more than a second glance. *sigh*
And just think only 80 left to go!
*curls into fetal position and whimpers*
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*edits post*
Skaara is like the one name I never remember how to spell. *face/palm*
If hurt to write. =/ I kept flipping out because they have to be friends, dammit! But it could've gone the other way really easily. :(
Hours was hard too because I had to watch the ep a coupla times to make sure I had the details right. I'm writing all of these when I don't have internet access, so I can't just go look up transcripts for the info. I kept rewinding over that line I used at the end to make sure I had it down right, and...and...*wibble*
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