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wrenscribbles

SPN: Best Laid Plans

Dec 14, 2006 17:29

Title: Best Laid Plans
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC17
Words: 5400+
Characters: Sam/Dean
Warning: Incest
Summary: Written for undermistletoe's Harlequin AU week, based oh-so-loosely on the following prompt:

Appearances can be... deadly! And this was a lesson Ash Kelly, explosives expert for Onyxxx, should have learned long ago. For though he's more than ( Read more... )

Comments 22

ceares December 15 2006, 01:43:25 UTC

Wow, I do love this. You did terrific things with the prompt, creating an intriguing alternate universe, while still playing with canon elements. Really nice job-and um, did I mention it was pretty damn hot?

wrenscribbles December 19 2006, 02:51:07 UTC

Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this, even if it did drive me nuts sometimes :D

eboniorchid December 15 2006, 01:53:07 UTC

Awesome! I love the idea of Sam seducing Dean at boarding school! And, of course, awesome job with the prompt. Sexy parts, interesting character exploration, and great action sequences too. Yay! Good job!

wrenscribbles December 19 2006, 02:51:54 UTC

*giggle* I have a not-so-secret weakness for boarding school sex, I swear it snuck in while I wasn't looking ;) Thank you!

tsuki_no_bara December 15 2006, 02:30:50 UTC

5400 words! O.O they're always longer than they look. the smut's still hot and the added line at the end is good. :D and hey, i like the whiny crap totally don't mind audiencing!

wrenscribbles December 19 2006, 02:52:23 UTC

This is totally the year I broke the thousand-word barrier, WHOO!!

nighean_isis December 15 2006, 03:39:58 UTC

I like it! You have the beginning of a seriously good AU here. You may have intended it as a one-shot, but I hope you develop it further.

undermistletoe's Harlequin AU week

LOL. I used to read those things in high school!

wrenscribbles December 19 2006, 03:02:49 UTC

Hee! Well, I tried to make it as "complete" a story as I could for the challenge, but erm... oh yeah, it's trying really hard to sprout a sequel. Thank you! :D

beatperfume December 15 2006, 07:01:25 UTC

Oh My God. I just wrote you this huge long feedback thing, and then LJ ate it. But uh, the gist of it was ( ... )

wrenscribbles December 19 2006, 03:08:01 UTC

Because I can't think of many things hotter than Sam blowing shit up.

See, when I was looking at the prompts I thought, "Oh, I have to make Sam blow something up. It would be SO HOT." :D

*squeezes you* Thank you! One of my big worries was that the whole fic would collapse under its own backstory, it kept trying to. There will probably... most likely be more. One day.

beatperfume December 19 2006, 04:55:00 UTC

Yes! Sam needs to blow stuff up WAY more often!

There will probably... most likely be more. One day.
YAY! And if there's anything I can do to help that along, you just let me know. :)

Maybe I can trade you, AU for AU. ;)