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wrenscribbles

CWRPS AU: Captivate

Dec 31, 2006 23:57

Title: Captivate
Fandom: CWRPS AU
Rating: NC17
Words: 1600+
Characters: Jared/Jensen
Summary: Jensen hasn't been completely honest with Jared. Luckily, all roads lead to SMUT.
Disclaimer: Nobody here is mine. Dammit.
Author's Note: For josselin's AU 'verse again, which is here. Set roughly three years after my other fic in the 'verse. Thanks to josselin for beta ( Read more... )

Comments 18

josselin January 1 2007, 06:25:57 UTC

This is my favorite part:

Which is how they got to the point where Jared happened to pin Jensen to the bed -- just making out, nothing serious to it at all -- and Jensen came in his pants.

Yay, you posted! Happy New Year!

wrenscribbles January 1 2007, 18:12:38 UTC

I did, and just barely in time, too! *hugs* You know none of this would be possible without your crack. I mean, ficverse :D

without_me January 1 2007, 08:15:30 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmnnnnnurrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhhhh...

wrenscribbles January 1 2007, 18:12:47 UTC

*giggles* Thank you :D

brynwulf January 1 2007, 15:20:12 UTC

Ok, how have I totally fucking MISSED this universe? YUM! Nicely done, Wren! :)

wrenscribbles January 1 2007, 18:13:53 UTC

Hee! Well, Joss never quite got it wrapped up nicely enough to post anywhere but her own journal, it's mostly in bits and pieces... but I'm glad you like my pieces, thank you! :D

tsuki_no_bara January 1 2007, 20:36:30 UTC

*takes a moment*

*takes another one*

aside from the general hotness and the image of jared suddenly filling out when jensen's not paying attention, i think my favorite mental picture is jared peeling off his THREE shirts. because he wouldn't be jared unless he was wearing layers of clothes.

wrenscribbles January 1 2007, 22:55:46 UTC

*giggles and giggles* Of course he wouldn't. Some things are just inherent.

beatperfume January 2 2007, 04:16:14 UTC

Um.

Okay, I really have no idea what to say here. Because I am dead from the hotness. Um.

Jared (in any incarnation) being toppy is a HUGE kink of mine, and when he said "Christ, I wanna fuck you until you taste me." I think I just blanked out for a couple minutes from like, pure hotness.

I love the little details you give, like "college prep" and Julian's snarky comments, and Jared's three layers of shirts.

And uh, the hot. That too.

wrenscribbles January 8 2007, 02:34:03 UTC

Toppy!Jared is a beautiful, beautful thing, yeah? :D *squeezes you* I'm so glad you liked it, thank you :)