A Long Forgotten Kiss 14/?

Apr 26, 2005 23:05

Hey everyone, this is the next chapter, which took longer than intended because it was reworked. Or rather, one particular passage was reworked. More details about that at the end of the fic. But first: Chapter 14

Title: A Long Forgotten Kiss
Author: akinaj
Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: 18+ eventually, this chapter ( Read more... )

fic: spike/xander, fic: spike/xander: alfk

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authoressnebula April 26 2005, 21:28:45 UTC
Lovely, lovely story that Spike told. I'm glad you told it that way. It really fits nicely with everything else.

But now I know what the little wooden box is for! *bounces happily* One more thing to add to the puzzle, lol.

Wonderful chappy hun. More soon?

~Nebula

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writan_bur April 27 2005, 06:22:06 UTC
*smile* glad you like *bounces with you*

More sonish, I've started on the next chapter but it isn't finished yet...

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amejisuto April 26 2005, 21:33:26 UTC
Whoot! So very good! Nice wedding luv, and I'm glad telling the story seemed to make Xander better. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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writan_bur April 27 2005, 06:25:04 UTC
*evil grin* wait and see what happens next! :P

Glad you like, love! *bounce*

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ilovedoyle April 26 2005, 21:59:55 UTC
yay! update!
continues 2 b a unique - and still fabulously written, s/x that i <3

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writan_bur April 27 2005, 06:25:24 UTC
*happy smile*

Thank you! *bounce*

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suki_blue April 26 2005, 22:05:02 UTC
That was lovely, hon.

My heart aches for them, seperated for so long and loving each other so much. Spike must have been completely broken by it. I wonder what Xander was feeling. Was he really just going quietly mad all by himself for all that time? Heartbreaking.

Very much looking forward to more. :o)

Email me at sukibluekitty@aol.com with your ideas for your icon. I know the symbol now. Just let me know a rough idea of what you'd like and I'll work on it. I don't have much time this week, but I'll get it done soon as.

~hugs~

Suki
xxx

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writan_bur April 27 2005, 06:27:11 UTC
Spike must have been completely broken by it. I wonder what Xander was feeling.

There will be more on the time that passed in between in later chapters, I promise.

Don't really have any ideas, but I'll have a think about it today and email you later! *hugs*

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lunabee34 April 26 2005, 22:23:22 UTC
Lovely lovely chapter. I am so glad to have more of the backstory explained and the portrait of the binding ceremony that you give us is very sweet. I don't think you should be nervous about the way you told it at all. Spike was literate after all; I think he could do "once upon a time" quite well. :) Good job!

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writan_bur April 27 2005, 06:29:21 UTC
*smile*

Thank you!

I just always want to do my best when writing a story, and am not always confident that I have done so...

And in hindsight, there were some details in the story that I didn't want to keep, so it's more vague and gives me more room to manoeuver now.

Glad you like it *bounce*

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lunabee34 April 27 2005, 13:22:24 UTC
I completely understand the insecurity. I suffer from it myself actually. *g* A little bit of it's healthy I think. :)

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