Week 1: Getting to Know The Characters

[rot_chan]

Title: Forever and a Day

Author: Rot-chan / Shelby
Characters/Pairings:  Shisui & Naruto;  Implied NaruSasuNaru + Shisui/Itachi
Exercise: [Week 1] “Getting To Know The Characters”
Warnings: Boy/boy though nothing PG-13. (And some crack.)

Reflection: I totally went AU with this. It’s more fun making AU ‘facts’ about characters. Also, did I mention how

Comments

[cosmosduvet]

Aw. Usually I don't like the Uchihas at all, but this was really sweet and nicely written as well. :)
And for Naruto: lol! :D I loved number 6.

[rot_chan]

Thanks hun! Glad you enjoyed it. It's satisfying to know I can make people enjoy stories about characters they usually dislike :3 What a nice compliment.

And LOL...for Naruto I had to do humor, for him I can't be serious at all :') I'm happy you found it funny though!

Critique!

[cosmosduvet]

Now here’s my critique, late as well… but I’ve been pretty busy. :)

Shisui
I really liked the beginning - it’s uncomplicated and made it easy to start reading. You also did well including the witty parts, like the end of fact 3 or fact 6. :) Fact 7 totally caught me - you attentively portray the relationship between Shisui and Itachi, and they are so in-character considering their ages.
Fact 9 got to me. And first I thought you should have made this the last fact, but then I read the whole thing again, and I’m glad you found such a light ending to put the finishing touch too it.

Naruto
It’s nice how facts 1 to 3 tie into each other, and I always like it when other characters get included just for a second like you did with Kiba. And again: fact 6, oh, lord, I love it. Although NaruSasu is anything but my OTP, I can so see it happening, and you managed to write about it in a cute but convincing way.

Actually I don’t have anything negative to say. Duh.