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Write_Up100 Challenge: Phoning it in

Apr 25, 2006 14:11

It's Sunday morning, the phone rings... 189 words.

ETA: And of course this is a moment in my ongoing Elliot/Agt. Toby series. D'oh.Yawning expansively, Elliot fumbled for the phone, dragged it over. Face still half-smooshed in the pillow, he growled, “Yeah?” Pale, wintry sunlight spilled through the windows and he was positive he’d only ( Read more... )

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colleendetroit April 25 2006, 23:23:05 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww...((warm fuzzy feelings))...loved it!

rileyc May 7 2006, 15:44:44 UTC

Thank you.

slip_f18 April 25 2006, 23:39:02 UTC

**skips happily** I love these boys. Thanks for the moment with them. :)

rileyc May 7 2006, 15:44:58 UTC

You're welcome, thanks.

pride_of_erin April 26 2006, 04:54:10 UTC

Those last couple of lines made go "awwwwwwww" out loud - thank you :o)

rileyc May 7 2006, 15:45:15 UTC

You''re welcome, thanks.

debaser28 April 26 2006, 18:49:26 UTC

This little snippet made me smile so much! I loved it. Thank you, Rebecca.:)

rileyc May 7 2006, 15:45:35 UTC

Glad you liked it, thanks.

luci_2 April 26 2006, 21:21:20 UTC

I love this Detective and this Special Agent. I've missed them.

rileyc May 7 2006, 15:46:10 UTC

Well, this was probably their final appearance, so glad it was a good one. Thank you.