Prologue to my book !!PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!

[writeaholic707]

The dock was cold like the water is was submerged in. The girl no older than nine stood with her feet covered in water, watching the sunset. She wore a long lavender dress which hem skimmed the top of the water as it moved about her legs in the breeze. The girl had fair features and hair as black as coal that matched her equally dark brown eyes.

Comments

[lilloads]

Okay Steph you asked for my opinion. It's AMAZING! You must keep writing it, I cannot wait for more, as of now I'm off to read the first chapter of it. You have so much talent in writing its amazing, like Krissy said, it is so emerging you feel as though you are drowning in the lake she is looking out upon. Amazing, amazing, amazing.

-Amanda (Your godmother)