The Hero

[writemepretty]

Cross-posted from Scribblespark. :)

Challenge #1 - write a piece inspired by the word 'glorification'.
Title: The Hero
Rating: T+
Summary: He sees the fine line between obedience and immorality, and knows that he has crossed it.
Word Count: 3,464
Notes?: Includes slash; the first slash I've written in a while, actually.  It's nothing graphic, but there

Comments

Wow.

[misslennykk]

I cannot say wow enough about "The Hero". It was so intriguing, it had me speed reading, yet I still took in every moment. It was not what I expected from the title, but that could have added to the satisfaction I felt after reading it. It was so much more than I thought, and I know I'm probably supposed to leave constructive criticism, and I wish I could, but I do not want a single thing to be changed. Amazing Job!!