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[writeonbroadway]

Title: There Will Be Tears Today
Chapter: 2
Summary: AU. Graduation Day. Jason and Peter never got outed, Ivy's not pregnant.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Peter/Jason
Genre: Drama, Angst
Time Period: Barely PostBare

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[fragilesymphony]

“I…” Jason trailed off, looking at Peter again. “I… What was that?!” He echoed his father, staring at Peter with wide eyes.
My jaw dropped and my heart sank, I swear. Holy fuck, that bastard. You know I love Jason, you know I normally defend him but...holy fuck that stupid fucking asshole. Poor Peter.

“Maybe you could tell your father that you’re gay.”
Cheered out loud, not gonna lie, hah. Peter with a backbone, hell yes! Jason deserves that.

And also, Nadia's officially my favorite twin. *glares at Jason*

Amazing. And heartbreaking. And you know, this could have so easily happened. Jason wouldn't have told, not that easily, and Peter...Peter especially is so in character, they both are. Which makes it even sadder, of course.

And oh, look, my 'favorite' McBastard character! Oh, Bill McConnell, I've missed you. Except not really. Heh. (Is Jason's mom standing in the background crying? Hee.)

[writeonbroadway]

Oh, well then, it had the right effect. That's pretty much what I wanted to happen...

Yeah, I threw in LA Peter for Laura. She better love me for the momentary lapse of Michael!Peter, I swear. Heh...

Good to know. I don't think she came off the way I intended, though...

Actually, yeah. He was just trying really hard not to look at her at first, and then she ran away crying. Somewhere after the whole "Jase, I love you." part.

I think she might tell Claire to disown him in future chapters.

[ilive4mywork]

It's the Kiwiness, trying to reply on my phone and most ikely failing, but I'm gonna TRY ANYWAY!

So, to sum up, you just about made me cry. How could you do that to poor Peter? And in a way, since it's kinda obvious now that Jason's hurting after what he just did, to Jason? I blame the icky daddy and everybody else.

And I also didn't like Lucas not being cool. That's not my Lucas! Icky. Bad not-my-Lucas, makin everythin worse.

And I also don't like Matt with Ivy. ...I dunno why. I really don't. I just know it's also icky.

And...OH MY GOD. Heartbreaking. Couldn't have written that better, my Megsie. -goes off to cry ;_;-

[armageddoni]

Um, yes, this is Ai, and I am officially dead.
*huggles with plushies and cries my eyeballs out*
StupidJasonbuttheadFatherneedstodie... *grumbles between the tears*
PETER, SWEETHEART!!! YOU ARE LOVED!!! HE LOVES YOU!!!
This was amazingly, brilliantly good. Genius. It's woven so well, my stomach hurts... from the story, not just randomly. Poor Peter. Poor Jason. His father must die. *stab* I don't like him... *stabity*
Brilliant, dear, just brilliantly amazingly genius.

[writeonbroadway]

Wow, thank you so much for all these comments and compliments! I live off of reviews, so this is really really big for me. Thank you so much!

And I'm sorry about making your stomach hurt...