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First Kiss- Part 2 of the Ten Firsts Series

Aug 27, 2012 00:12

Title: First Kiss - 2nd Installment of the Ten Firsts Series
Author: writer_ally
Word Count: ~1600
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sterek (Stiles Stilinski/Derek Hale)
Warnings: Slash, Slight Spoilers for Season 1 and 2 of Teen Wolf, AU after that

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angst, pg-13, au, slash, fanfiction, fluff, sterek, sequel

Comments 2

darkangel86_07 August 27 2012, 04:34:16 UTC

You. *giggles* Oh you. *sigh* This was. This was. This was perfect. It felt perfectly in character with Stiles too. So I wouldn't worry one bit about that. I've found that its a lot harder to get inside of Derek's head but I do believe you managed to pull it off. I wouldn't worry, if I was you. This was lovely and perfectly in character, if you ask me. Loved it and I can't wait to see what's next! :) <3

writer_ally August 27 2012, 04:45:39 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad :D I was mainly worried about Derek being in character, as I do find it easier to write Stiles (mostly because Dylan plays him with every single emotion visible on his face, so we almost always know what he's thinking, the darling boy!). I'm trying to find the line between Derek's sensitive side and his more harsh exterior, and I'm glad that you think I managed to pull it off! I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and hopefully I'll have an easier time with the next first...which is definitely going to be a fluffy one ;)