Comments | writer_girls: a disturbing scene, in more ways than one

arabwel in writer_girls

a disturbing scene, in more ways than one

Mar 05, 2007 23:46

So, hi ( Read more... )

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moralanqua March 19 2007, 00:22:44 UTC

This really needs to be edited back to scratch. The basics aren't there. Passive voice, grammar mistakes, typos and repetative wording make it difficult to read ( ... )