Short, Short Poems

[writergirlanon]

So much for keeping up with daily entries!  Saturday night, I was at my aunt's house for our family Christmas thing, right smack in the middle of a bite of turkey dressing, when my throat suddenly went "HEY!  PAY ATTENTION TO ME!  I HURT!"  Within about thirty seconds I had a fever, which thankfully didn't talk, but was annoying regardless.  I've

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[sinisterwilliam]

Although, I do think the NyQuil helped, I like the last one quite a bit, it hinges on the conceit given in the title but builds up on that. Pretty good for a poem that has less words than the title.

[writergirlanon]

Hah! Thanks :)

[luminous_femme]

I love all three, but I think my favourite lines are: You in your room-- A seed in a stone husk set below the moon.

That bit gives me shivers. :)

[writergirlanon]

Thank you!