LJ Idol - Week 0 - Introduction

Jan 19, 2013 02:53

I feel like it should be so easy to put into words who I am, what I am, though it is anything but. I am a puzzle; a thousand pieces put together to make a slightly blurry picture. These pieces are little things that are taken from the people I have met, the pain I have endured, and the places I have been. I am a collection of experiences and ( Read more... )

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walkertxkitty January 21 2013, 02:12:55 UTC
I happen to like puzzles --- the putting together, savoring the details when complete. I don't even throw away the ones I've got which have pieces missing.

Love the way you incorporated all the senses, not just one or two. It gave a complete picture of the images you were conveying. A pleasure reading!

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writerofictions January 21 2013, 05:17:27 UTC
I used to do the same thing. You can still make a good picture even with some pieces missing I think.

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momebie January 21 2013, 04:21:23 UTC
I love the imagery you've put into this. And god, I am my mother's disposition and my father's temper if there ever was such a combo.

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writerofictions January 21 2013, 05:17:57 UTC
Thank you! I know what you mean. My mother is so sweet and calm and understanding but my dad has a temper that just comes out at random. It's a crazy combo!

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comedychick January 21 2013, 06:53:36 UTC
I am a different person each time I meet someone new.

I tend to be, too. There is so much about me that I often tailor what I say to people I meet depending on what things we share in common.

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lilycobalt January 21 2013, 21:16:59 UTC
I enjoyed these glimpses of scenes from your life, especially the paragraph about your home. Well done!

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halfshellvenus January 22 2013, 04:46:43 UTC
Very nice, from beginning to end!

There were so many nice images here, but this one caught my eye:
I am a train climbing east into Philadelphia, busy and hurried and always just a little bit late.

In so many ways, that is also me. :)

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