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A Stumble in the Dark

Dec 14, 2009 17:46

Challenge Name: Words
Title: A Stumble in the Dark
Rating: PG-13, for slight language and violence
Required words: Killer, Remove, Indistinctly, Ta, Benzidine
Word Count (optional): 1,142
Author's Notes (optional): I’m hoping the series will lighten up again soon. Meanwhile, enjoy the violence…xD

( A Stumble in the Dark )

challenge thirteen: words, author: not_quite_queen

Comments 8

zombie_bandido December 17 2009, 09:29:43 UTC

O____O
WHOA.

You seriously have to continue this, my curiosity is rampaging around right now.

... xD sorry for the sucky comment, but as we established in Messenger, I'm only half coherent here.

not_quite_queen December 17 2009, 09:35:40 UTC

Oh, don't worry...I will continue...The story must go on. ^_~

zombie_bandido December 17 2009, 09:37:13 UTC

YAY!

saare_snowqueen December 17 2009, 16:37:40 UTC

Good. This is seriously engrossing.

angels_9 December 21 2009, 06:48:13 UTC

UUUUUH. O__O
I have no advice for you. Only that there are a few minor typos that I can't even remember right now becasue assassins? vampires? powers? murder? organization?
MOAR NAO PLZTHX.

not_quite_queen December 21 2009, 07:01:13 UTC

More is up! My response to the "Read the Script!" challenge is the next installment, told from Travis' POV. If you want to read what happened before this, too, you can go to my journal, click on the "Memories" tab, and go to "Romance with Espionage."

Oh, and don't forget to go vote! Voting closes in an hour.

angels_9 December 21 2009, 07:08:11 UTC

I sent you the votes in a message! I hope that's okay! Agh! Confused!! D8

not_quite_queen December 21 2009, 07:11:54 UTC

Oh, I just got it...Yeah, that's fine! No worries. In the future, though, go ahead and use the voting posts. The comments are screened (unless I forget...which I have. In that case, remind me. xD), so no one can see your votes but me.