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EXTRA! EXTRA!

Dec 15, 2009 19:05

Challenge Name: Words
Title: EXTRA! EXTRA!
Rating: R, for language
Required words: Squeeze, unadorned, modulate, sniffer, devoutness.
Word Count (optional): 752
Author's comments (optional): I'm sorry for all the swearing! They made me do it! D:

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challenge thirteen: words, author: angels_9

Comments 5

not_quite_queen December 16 2009, 04:09:47 UTC

Woot! Competition is on! ^_~

I like the pacing of this. Are these new characters, or have I just not met them yet? They might be able to give Puck a run for his money...xD Maybe even Shari, if it was strictly words.

ANYHOO. I might have added a few commas here and there, but that's it...If you remind me when I see you again, I'll try to find the spots.

angels_9 December 18 2009, 00:46:10 UTC

Thank you! This was a character set I created on the spot for this prompt. One of them named the band halfway through the piece. XD
I hope they stick around. (They want to give Puck a run for his money XD)
<3

not_quite_queen December 18 2009, 04:47:32 UTC

Then let the games begin...^_~

saare_snowqueen December 17 2009, 16:42:07 UTC

I really like this. As someone who managed a country-western band in New York City (an oxymoron if ever there was on) the situation and dialogue ring very true.

angels_9 December 18 2009, 00:46:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it was somewhat accurate. :)