Comments | writers_island: Star Trek XI -- "Not Your Average Pon Farr Story" -- Part 4 of 4

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Star Trek XI -- "Not Your Average Pon Farr Story" -- Part 4 of 4

Oct 30, 2011 16:30

The heat rushed into his mind, burning like a star.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

( Not Your Average Pon Farr Story | PG-13 | 1094 words | 4 of 4 )

fanfic - st - not your average pon farr, fanfic - st - reboot

Comments 18

zamoraoce November 2 2011, 05:55:03 UTC

For some reason, I can’t see all of this content, stuff keeps hiding? Are you taking advantage of java?

melayneseahawk November 2 2011, 15:23:10 UTC

Hmm, odd. No one else has said they're having trouble with it. Sorry!

antesqueluz November 7 2011, 03:08:31 UTC

Loved this.

melayneseahawk November 7 2011, 13:26:07 UTC

Thanks!

pretty_panther November 8 2011, 15:07:39 UTC

I love this ♥

melayneseahawk November 8 2011, 16:36:49 UTC

Thank you!

isla_verdad March 21 2012, 21:08:24 UTC

I love stories where Jim is the one to go into pon farr and Spock has to save him - and this was delicious. Very nice unfolding of the symptoms and the diagnosis, and of course, the resolution! I can definitely see Spock being reluctant to take perceived "advantage" of Jim, so that rang true to me. But it was lovely to have it all work out in the end. :)

melayneseahawk March 21 2012, 21:35:59 UTC

Thank you!