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bostongirl2003 February 11 2012, 04:18:57 UTC
I love how in-character everyone is, even just in snippet form. And also, that Jim doesn't go from "irritated" to "ready to pound nails" at just the thought of sex. Great story bb!

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melayneseahawk February 11 2012, 15:35:26 UTC
Hee. Thank you!

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offski February 11 2012, 07:37:58 UTC
I didn't need to go to the photobucket image, you put the picture straight into my head. And yet when I read back, there is scarcely any description. That is very clever writing.

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melayneseahawk February 11 2012, 15:35:58 UTC
Wow, quite a compliment. Thank you!

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melayneseahawk February 13 2012, 02:25:53 UTC
Thank you!

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