I love how in-character everyone is, even just in snippet form. And also, that Jim doesn't go from "irritated" to "ready to pound nails" at just the thought of sex. Great story bb!
I didn't need to go to the photobucket image, you put the picture straight into my head. And yet when I read back, there is scarcely any description. That is very clever writing.
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