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Mountain-dwellers
- Chapter One -
He liked to start off each day with a sigh. It helped him ease the pain that mornings caused him. Of course, for a man of 43, it seems strange to consider 4:18 in the afternoon, 'morning,' but for the purposes of his sanity, Cedric liked to imagine the sun perking up through the endless mountains that ( Read more... )
- Chapter One -
He liked to start off each day with a sigh. It helped him ease the pain that mornings caused him. Of course, for a man of 43, it seems strange to consider 4:18 in the afternoon, 'morning,' but for the purposes of his sanity, Cedric liked to imagine the sun perking up through the endless mountains that ( Read more... )
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here are some things that I like about this story, firstly the idea of god falling asleep and the resulting chaos.
Secondly, I enjoy the character Cedric and his general outlook on life, at this point I can relate.
you've really drawn me in on this one, you've left things untold, and being bit vague is a good way to evoke curiousty and inspire the reader to continue...keep this one going I'm liking it so far.
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