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writing2death

Fic: Outside the Box

Nov 01, 2010 11:54

What? What do you mean this isn't in the Merlin fandom? O.O

Title: Outside the Box
Author: writing2death
Beta: magi143emmykat , who deserves a metal. Really.
Word Count: 2,390 words
Rating: PG
Warnings: Um, you might actually start foaming fluff at the mouth. Just saying.
Disclaimer: I own nothing :)
Notes: This was written entirely for wren_hightower , who was dying the horribly slow ( Read more... )

pairing: hotch/reid, story: fanfiction, fic: outside the box, fandom: criminal minds, genre: fluff

Comments 31

wren_hightower November 2 2010, 15:49:19 UTC

Ugh. Mff. Love.

Well I think you have the Spencer voice down, certainly. And when he and Hotch talk I can picture them saying it.

The light switch thing. <3<3 And that colour/box comparison at the end was perfection. AND JACK!!!!! There's so much love for this, you don't even know.

Thank you!!!!<3<3<3

writing2death November 3 2010, 00:02:31 UTC

Thank you, BB. I'm just sooo glad you liked it ♥♥♥

kramskii November 6 2010, 04:21:18 UTC

It was really good. I liked it!

I think you did Reid well.

writing2death November 6 2010, 04:28:13 UTC

Thank you ♥♥ :D

daylyn December 10 2010, 04:29:37 UTC

Oh, this is just sweet and lovely. There's a quiet gentleness to it. I loved the idea of Spencer showing Jack math (and math 'magic') and the scene of Hotch coming home to both of them sleeping on the couch is just adorable. Excellent first fic and I truly hope that you write more.

writing2death December 10 2010, 05:14:49 UTC

Thank you so much :)
I'm so happy you liked it :D

fabrisse December 10 2010, 04:48:49 UTC

I liked this.

writing2death December 10 2010, 05:13:26 UTC

Thank you ♥

calendae December 10 2010, 04:50:35 UTC

What is KD?

writing2death December 10 2010, 04:52:00 UTC

It's supposed to be Kraft Dinner. Possibly I may change it to the actual words now. Don't want it to be confusing :) Thanks for letting me know that it was :)

justspaz December 10 2010, 04:57:22 UTC

Don't want to butt in, but while Kraft Dinner clears it up, we definitely don't call it that here. Just mac and cheese, or Kraft mac and cheese if we specifically want the Cheesiest, :D.

I really loved this fic though! Math magic would have been very helpful to me as a child/right now as a college student.

writing2death December 10 2010, 04:59:36 UTC

I thought of that afterwards actually, and I changed it to macaroni and cheese because I thought pretty much everyone would get that :)

And thank you :) I'm really glad you liked the story :)