Home, O +3, Merlinlilian_choJuly 24 2010, 01:46:20 UTC
The first thing I do is open my eyes. Actually, "try to go back to sleep" or "say Hi" is more accurate, but let's stick with "O" for this exercise >_>
Prompt: Old Money +3, 60 words
Part 1 of my (one-sided) Vivian/Arthur, Vivian/Leon ficlet. Tentatively titled "Enchanted No More." Abusing my modly powers to screen these comments for now until after summerpornathon challenge 4 voting is done.
Mainly for benebu's benefit: Vivian is a character we see in Merlin 2 X 10.
Vivian didn't remember when her fascination with Arthur Pendragon started. One day he was the odious son of her father's business partner, and the next morning he shone gold like knights of old.
At first Arthur seemed flattered by the attention. He showed her all around the Pendragon estate, even holding her hand when they walked across a hilly terrain.
Then at one crucial dinner, Uther remarked to her father how she seemed so self-possessed for a sixteen-year-old. Arthur had looked as if he had been forced to eat haggis. Ever since then, he had treated her like a little sister one barely tolerated.
How dare Arthur treat me like a little girl! Vivian fumed. He was only two years and seven months older than her. It wasn’t like she wanted them to elope to Gretna Green or something.
She had seen pictures of Arthur's exes. One round-cheeked girl, wearing a yellow dress with trailing rosebuds, looked fourteen. Another girl-Jen or whatever her name was-looked quite ordinary and nowhere as pretty as her.
Arthur thinks he's too mature for her, does he? I'll show him mature, she thought, crossing her arms in front of her.
Leon, Uther's secretary, closed the door to the study.
"If you're looking for Arthur, he's-Mmmph!"
As first kisses go, it was quite fantastic. Leon was handsome enough, even though facial hair was not her thing. His lips were a bit chapped but surprisingly soft. From the way his tongue stroke hotly against hers, it was safe to assume that he found her attractive too.
She clutched at his shirt and pressed their bodies together. She could taste the tea he had for breakfast, something minty and pleasant. No bacon sandwich aftertaste here, thank God.
Her nipples ached where they rubbed against her lace bra. One big hand smoothed down the back of her dress, resting on the swell of her arse. The heat of his hands on her skin almost felt too much. She whimpered and held on to his shoulders. His lips suddenly stilled against hers.
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Prompt: Old Money +3, 60 words
Part 1 of my (one-sided) Vivian/Arthur, Vivian/Leon ficlet. Tentatively titled "Enchanted No More."
Abusing my modly powers to screen these comments for now until after summerpornathon challenge 4 voting is done.
Mainly for benebu's benefit: Vivian is a character we see in Merlin 2 X 10.
Vivian didn't remember when her fascination with Arthur Pendragon started. One day he was the odious son of her father's business partner, and the next morning he shone gold like knights of old.
At first Arthur seemed flattered by the attention. He showed her all around the Pendragon estate, even holding her hand when they walked across a hilly terrain.
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Total pts: 3
Action: Part +1, 79 words
Enchanted No More [ 1]
Then at one crucial dinner, Uther remarked to her father how she seemed so self-possessed for a sixteen-year-old. Arthur had looked as if he had been forced to eat haggis. Ever since then, he had treated her like a little sister one barely tolerated.
How dare Arthur treat me like a little girl! Vivian fumed. He was only two years and seven months older than her. It wasn’t like she wanted them to elope to Gretna Green or something.
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Total pts: 4
Rosebud +3, Flushed +1, 58 words
Enchanted No More [ 1][ 2]
She had seen pictures of Arthur's exes. One round-cheeked girl, wearing a yellow dress with trailing rosebuds, looked fourteen. Another girl-Jen or whatever her name was-looked quite ordinary and nowhere as pretty as her.
Arthur thinks he's too mature for her, does he? I'll show him mature, she thought, crossing her arms in front of her.
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Total pts: 8
Prompt: Mint-Flavored +3, 100 words
Enchanted No More [ 1][ 2][ 3]
"Vivian? Did you want something?"
Leon, Uther's secretary, closed the door to the study.
"If you're looking for Arthur, he's-Mmmph!"
As first kisses go, it was quite fantastic. Leon was handsome enough, even though facial hair was not her thing. His lips were a bit chapped but surprisingly soft. From the way his tongue stroke hotly against hers, it was safe to assume that he found her attractive too.
She clutched at his shirt and pressed their bodies together. She could taste the tea he had for breakfast, something minty and pleasant. No bacon sandwich aftertaste here, thank God.
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Total pts: 11
As the World Turns +2, 53 words
My only defense is: Noah/Luke kiss ~ Leon/Vivian kiss in that they're both soap opera-ish =P
Enchanted No More [ 1][ 2][ 3][ 4]
Her nipples ached where they rubbed against her lace bra. One big hand smoothed down the back of her dress, resting on the swell of her arse. The heat of his hands on her skin almost felt too much. She whimpered and held on to his shoulders. His lips suddenly stilled against hers.
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